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I'm writing a fantasy story set in an imaginary world. For the first time, I'm giving geographical informations and... I don't really know how to give them, actually. My alpha reader told me it was hard to use my current informations to visualize anything because they were too scarce and imprecise.
Basically, I want to say that :
- Country A is big (to give you a comparison, think about a land stretching from western France to eastern Austria, from southern France to northern Germany)
- Country B is smaller and west to Country A (think Hungary)
- Capital City is located in the south-center of Country A
I could give measures in kilometers for instance, but I feel like it ruins the magic of the fantasy setting, as well as being too precise compared to the characters' knowledge (my narration is very close to their points of view and the characters are mostly illiterate, being brought up in a military orphanage).
Of course, I considered giving time estimations, but I'm not really satisfied with it either, because of both the previous argument and the fact that my characters will have to walk to Country B from Capital City, but not in a straight line and with stops in various cities, so it will be longer than it could.
How can I give enough informations to let my readers have a sufficient mental representation of my world's cartography, without breaking too much the immersion ?
Any hindsight would be appreciated. Thanks !
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I'm writing a fantasy story set in an imaginary world. For the first time, I'm giving geographical informations and... I don't really know how to give them, actually. My alpha reader told me it was hard to use my current informations to visualize anything because they were too scarce and imprecise.
Basically, I want to say that :
- Country A is big (to give you a comparison, think about a land stretching from western France to eastern Austria, from southern France to northern Germany)
- Country B is smaller and west to Country A (think Hungary)
- Capital City is located in the south-center of Country A
I could give measures in kilometers for instance, but I feel like it ruins the magic of the fantasy setting, as well as being too precise compared to the characters' knowledge (my narration is very close to their points of view and the characters are mostly illiterate, being brought up in a military orphanage).
Of course, I considered giving time estimations, but I'm not really satisfied with it either, because of both the previous argument and the fact that my characters will have to walk to Country B from Capital City, but not in a straight line and with stops in various cities, so it will be longer than it could.
How can I give enough informations to let my readers have a sufficient mental representation of my world's cartography, without breaking too much the immersion ?
Any hindsight would be appreciated. Thanks !
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I'm writing a fantasy story set in an imaginary world. For the first time, I'm giving geographical informations and... I don't really know how to give them, actually. My alpha reader told me it was hard to use my current informations to visualize anything because they were too scarce and imprecise.
Basically, I want to say that :
- Country A is big (to give you a comparison, think about a land stretching from western France to eastern Austria, from southern France to northern Germany)
- Country B is smaller and west to Country A (think Hungary)
- Capital City is located in the south-center of Country A
I could give measures in kilometers for instance, but I feel like it ruins the magic of the fantasy setting, as well as being too precise compared to the characters' knowledge (my narration is very close to their points of view and the characters are mostly illiterate, being brought up in a military orphanage).
Of course, I considered giving time estimations, but I'm not really satisfied with it either, because of both the previous argument and the fact that my characters will have to walk to Country B from Capital City, but not in a straight line and with stops in various cities, so it will be longer than it could.
How can I give enough informations to let my readers have a sufficient mental representation of my world's cartography, without breaking too much the immersion ?
Any hindsight would be appreciated. Thanks !
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I'm writing a fantasy story set in an imaginary world. For the first time, I'm giving geographical informations and... I don't really know how to give them, actually. My alpha reader told me it was hard to use my current informations to visualize anything because they were too scarce and imprecise.
Basically, I want to say that :
- Country A is big (to give you a comparison, think about a land stretching from western France to eastern Austria, from southern France to northern Germany)
- Country B is smaller and west to Country A (think Hungary)
- Capital City is located in the south-center of Country A
I could give measures in kilometers for instance, but I feel like it ruins the magic of the fantasy setting, as well as being too precise compared to the characters' knowledge (my narration is very close to their points of view and the characters are mostly illiterate, being brought up in a military orphanage).
Of course, I considered giving time estimations, but I'm not really satisfied with it either, because of both the previous argument and the fact that my characters will have to walk to Country B from Capital City, but not in a straight line and with stops in various cities, so it will be longer than it could.
How can I give enough informations to let my readers have a sufficient mental representation of my world's cartography, without breaking too much the immersion ?
Any hindsight would be appreciated. Thanks !
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You can give hints of cartography through the words you choose.
As for an example, let's call country A the Holy Empire of Highmarch, and country B the Duchy of Hillsberry. I just made up these names. But what do they tell to the reader?
For country A, we now know that it is probably a vast territory, that religion has a great part in it, and that Highmarch must refers to mountains or harsh lands, and only with these informations you already can figure what the people would look like, how hard is their lifes, and so on.
For country B, the fact this is a Duchy means a smaller territory, with less authority, and the Hillsberry part probably reminds you of, let's say, hills and berries, two things that are probably nicer than anything in Highmarch.
Also, keep in mind that Kingdoms are good, Empires are evil: the trope is strong enough that you can use it at your advantage to give a good sense of cartography only by naming places.
You can give measures by what they mean to the characters.
If a kilometer breaks immersion in a fantasy setting, how about using measures that means something to them? Yards, feet and any imperial unit "feels" appropriate for a fantasy setting because it refers to something the reader know, even if they are not europeans (meaning, not imperial units-user).
However, for longer distances (because who still uses furlongs nowadays anyway?), you have to tell the reader by something they can relate to:
- How long is a road when using horses? How many times must they stop to rest?
- Do their beards grow? How much?
- Are they tired at the end of their trek? Was it easier than they thought?
- How much did they eat? Did they had to count on their supplies? Hunt in the woods? Gather potatoes in fields? Do they starve? How do people greet them?
All these questions can help the reader feeling what it is like to travel from one country to another, from the length of the trek to the character of the people they will meet, thus giving us indirect informations about the land they're living in.
A good choice of words will make Arthur starve on the muddy path to Windheld Manor. A poor choice of words will just make "Jim goes 3km to town".
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In Uprooted, Naomi Novik deals quite elegantly with this issue.
First, she doesn't dump all the information at once, but sprinkles it where it's relevant.
We lived in Dvernik, which wasn't the biggest village in the valley or the smallest, or the one nearest the Wood: we were seven miles away. The road took us up over a big hill, though, and at the top on a clear day you could see along the river all the way to the pale grey strip of burned earth at the leading edge, and the solid dark wall of trees beyond. The Dragon's tower was a long way in the other direction, a piece of white chalk stuck in the base of the western mountains. (Naomi Novik, Uprooted, chapter 1)
So we learn the topographic details (valley, mountains on one side, forest on the other, you can see from one end to the other from atop a hill.
Later, we gain more bits and pieces:
Our valley was at the very edge of Polnya (ibid)
and
The Dragon had been called to court that year (ibid)
and
He never came out of his tower to stand a drink for the men at harvest-time the way the Baron of the Yellow Marshes would. (ibid)
and
singers would come through over the mountain pass from Rosya (ibid)
So gradually we learn the name of the country (Polnya), and that there's another country (Rosya), that the court of Polnya is some distance from the valley, that there's a place called "Yellow Marshes" and it's close enough for villagers to be familiar with how their lord acts. All of this information is interwoven with the narration. Because the cartography information is interwoven with the narration, it creates a general picture that fits into the story, instead of requiring the reader to remember details that are not connected to anything.
Distances in kilometres are less important than "how long it would take to travel from point A to point B". If there's a mountain range between point A and point B, they're for all intents and purposes farther apart than if there were fields there instead. It used to be quite common to measure distances in days of travel (on horse, on foot), and that's information you can expect a common illiterate person to know; not from one side of the country to another, but from one village to another, to the nearest city, etc. A person would know quite well the area within which he routinely travels (whether it's a farmer who travels as far as the nearest market, or a peddler who does somewhat longer journeys, or a soldier who's being sent every which way). Beyond that, they'd have an idea of what's around, gleaned from what they head at the market or in a tavern. And further away it's names of important locations and "here be dragons". If you think about it, there was no reason for an average person to care about distance in km, but every reason to care about distance in travel-days.
tl;dr topographic features ("I can see the mountains from my village") and travel times give a general frame of things without breaking the immersion.
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Create a Fantasy Map.
It doesn't need to be terribly detailed, and it is a beloved convention of fantasy genre.
Writing Excuses has a podcast on the topic: https://writingexcuses.com/2016/11/03/11-bonus-03-some-books-have-maps-in-the-front-with-maurice-broaddus-mur-lafferty-and-james-sutter/
The website Fantastic Maps has tutorials in many styles:
http://www.fantasticmaps.com
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Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
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@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
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I can think of a few stock phrases and techniques that might be useful to you:
use time instead of distance, "[hours, days, weeks or months] of travel" people travel
at different rates so while it gives an idea of the relationship between two places it doesn't give a precise distance.when you do give numbered distances be vague, "hundreds of miles", "four thousand odd miles", again it gives the reader an idea of what it takes to go from A to B but without giving an exact position.
with directions use the cardinal points, north, south, east, and west, precisely but the then be vague about the secondary notes "a hundred miles north, and somewhat east of...", this puts you roughly on the map without being an exact position or travel distance.
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You can give hints of cartography through the words you choose.
As for an example, let's call country A the Holy Empire of Highmarch, and country B the Duchy of Hillsberry. I just made up these names. But what do they tell to the reader?
For country A, we now know that it is probably a vast territory, that religion has a great part in it, and that Highmarch must refers to mountains or harsh lands, and only with these informations you already can figure what the people would look like, how hard is their lifes, and so on.
For country B, the fact this is a Duchy means a smaller territory, with less authority, and the Hillsberry part probably reminds you of, let's say, hills and berries, two things that are probably nicer than anything in Highmarch.
Also, keep in mind that Kingdoms are good, Empires are evil: the trope is strong enough that you can use it at your advantage to give a good sense of cartography only by naming places.
You can give measures by what they mean to the characters.
If a kilometer breaks immersion in a fantasy setting, how about using measures that means something to them? Yards, feet and any imperial unit "feels" appropriate for a fantasy setting because it refers to something the reader know, even if they are not europeans (meaning, not imperial units-user).
However, for longer distances (because who still uses furlongs nowadays anyway?), you have to tell the reader by something they can relate to:
- How long is a road when using horses? How many times must they stop to rest?
- Do their beards grow? How much?
- Are they tired at the end of their trek? Was it easier than they thought?
- How much did they eat? Did they had to count on their supplies? Hunt in the woods? Gather potatoes in fields? Do they starve? How do people greet them?
All these questions can help the reader feeling what it is like to travel from one country to another, from the length of the trek to the character of the people they will meet, thus giving us indirect informations about the land they're living in.
A good choice of words will make Arthur starve on the muddy path to Windheld Manor. A poor choice of words will just make "Jim goes 3km to town".
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You can give hints of cartography through the words you choose.
As for an example, let's call country A the Holy Empire of Highmarch, and country B the Duchy of Hillsberry. I just made up these names. But what do they tell to the reader?
For country A, we now know that it is probably a vast territory, that religion has a great part in it, and that Highmarch must refers to mountains or harsh lands, and only with these informations you already can figure what the people would look like, how hard is their lifes, and so on.
For country B, the fact this is a Duchy means a smaller territory, with less authority, and the Hillsberry part probably reminds you of, let's say, hills and berries, two things that are probably nicer than anything in Highmarch.
Also, keep in mind that Kingdoms are good, Empires are evil: the trope is strong enough that you can use it at your advantage to give a good sense of cartography only by naming places.
You can give measures by what they mean to the characters.
If a kilometer breaks immersion in a fantasy setting, how about using measures that means something to them? Yards, feet and any imperial unit "feels" appropriate for a fantasy setting because it refers to something the reader know, even if they are not europeans (meaning, not imperial units-user).
However, for longer distances (because who still uses furlongs nowadays anyway?), you have to tell the reader by something they can relate to:
- How long is a road when using horses? How many times must they stop to rest?
- Do their beards grow? How much?
- Are they tired at the end of their trek? Was it easier than they thought?
- How much did they eat? Did they had to count on their supplies? Hunt in the woods? Gather potatoes in fields? Do they starve? How do people greet them?
All these questions can help the reader feeling what it is like to travel from one country to another, from the length of the trek to the character of the people they will meet, thus giving us indirect informations about the land they're living in.
A good choice of words will make Arthur starve on the muddy path to Windheld Manor. A poor choice of words will just make "Jim goes 3km to town".
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You can give hints of cartography through the words you choose.
As for an example, let's call country A the Holy Empire of Highmarch, and country B the Duchy of Hillsberry. I just made up these names. But what do they tell to the reader?
For country A, we now know that it is probably a vast territory, that religion has a great part in it, and that Highmarch must refers to mountains or harsh lands, and only with these informations you already can figure what the people would look like, how hard is their lifes, and so on.
For country B, the fact this is a Duchy means a smaller territory, with less authority, and the Hillsberry part probably reminds you of, let's say, hills and berries, two things that are probably nicer than anything in Highmarch.
Also, keep in mind that Kingdoms are good, Empires are evil: the trope is strong enough that you can use it at your advantage to give a good sense of cartography only by naming places.
You can give measures by what they mean to the characters.
If a kilometer breaks immersion in a fantasy setting, how about using measures that means something to them? Yards, feet and any imperial unit "feels" appropriate for a fantasy setting because it refers to something the reader know, even if they are not europeans (meaning, not imperial units-user).
However, for longer distances (because who still uses furlongs nowadays anyway?), you have to tell the reader by something they can relate to:
- How long is a road when using horses? How many times must they stop to rest?
- Do their beards grow? How much?
- Are they tired at the end of their trek? Was it easier than they thought?
- How much did they eat? Did they had to count on their supplies? Hunt in the woods? Gather potatoes in fields? Do they starve? How do people greet them?
All these questions can help the reader feeling what it is like to travel from one country to another, from the length of the trek to the character of the people they will meet, thus giving us indirect informations about the land they're living in.
A good choice of words will make Arthur starve on the muddy path to Windheld Manor. A poor choice of words will just make "Jim goes 3km to town".
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kikirex
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You can give hints of cartography through the words you choose.
As for an example, let's call country A the Holy Empire of Highmarch, and country B the Duchy of Hillsberry. I just made up these names. But what do they tell to the reader?
For country A, we now know that it is probably a vast territory, that religion has a great part in it, and that Highmarch must refers to mountains or harsh lands, and only with these informations you already can figure what the people would look like, how hard is their lifes, and so on.
For country B, the fact this is a Duchy means a smaller territory, with less authority, and the Hillsberry part probably reminds you of, let's say, hills and berries, two things that are probably nicer than anything in Highmarch.
Also, keep in mind that Kingdoms are good, Empires are evil: the trope is strong enough that you can use it at your advantage to give a good sense of cartography only by naming places.
You can give measures by what they mean to the characters.
If a kilometer breaks immersion in a fantasy setting, how about using measures that means something to them? Yards, feet and any imperial unit "feels" appropriate for a fantasy setting because it refers to something the reader know, even if they are not europeans (meaning, not imperial units-user).
However, for longer distances (because who still uses furlongs nowadays anyway?), you have to tell the reader by something they can relate to:
- How long is a road when using horses? How many times must they stop to rest?
- Do their beards grow? How much?
- Are they tired at the end of their trek? Was it easier than they thought?
- How much did they eat? Did they had to count on their supplies? Hunt in the woods? Gather potatoes in fields? Do they starve? How do people greet them?
All these questions can help the reader feeling what it is like to travel from one country to another, from the length of the trek to the character of the people they will meet, thus giving us indirect informations about the land they're living in.
A good choice of words will make Arthur starve on the muddy path to Windheld Manor. A poor choice of words will just make "Jim goes 3km to town".
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In Uprooted, Naomi Novik deals quite elegantly with this issue.
First, she doesn't dump all the information at once, but sprinkles it where it's relevant.
We lived in Dvernik, which wasn't the biggest village in the valley or the smallest, or the one nearest the Wood: we were seven miles away. The road took us up over a big hill, though, and at the top on a clear day you could see along the river all the way to the pale grey strip of burned earth at the leading edge, and the solid dark wall of trees beyond. The Dragon's tower was a long way in the other direction, a piece of white chalk stuck in the base of the western mountains. (Naomi Novik, Uprooted, chapter 1)
So we learn the topographic details (valley, mountains on one side, forest on the other, you can see from one end to the other from atop a hill.
Later, we gain more bits and pieces:
Our valley was at the very edge of Polnya (ibid)
and
The Dragon had been called to court that year (ibid)
and
He never came out of his tower to stand a drink for the men at harvest-time the way the Baron of the Yellow Marshes would. (ibid)
and
singers would come through over the mountain pass from Rosya (ibid)
So gradually we learn the name of the country (Polnya), and that there's another country (Rosya), that the court of Polnya is some distance from the valley, that there's a place called "Yellow Marshes" and it's close enough for villagers to be familiar with how their lord acts. All of this information is interwoven with the narration. Because the cartography information is interwoven with the narration, it creates a general picture that fits into the story, instead of requiring the reader to remember details that are not connected to anything.
Distances in kilometres are less important than "how long it would take to travel from point A to point B". If there's a mountain range between point A and point B, they're for all intents and purposes farther apart than if there were fields there instead. It used to be quite common to measure distances in days of travel (on horse, on foot), and that's information you can expect a common illiterate person to know; not from one side of the country to another, but from one village to another, to the nearest city, etc. A person would know quite well the area within which he routinely travels (whether it's a farmer who travels as far as the nearest market, or a peddler who does somewhat longer journeys, or a soldier who's being sent every which way). Beyond that, they'd have an idea of what's around, gleaned from what they head at the market or in a tavern. And further away it's names of important locations and "here be dragons". If you think about it, there was no reason for an average person to care about distance in km, but every reason to care about distance in travel-days.
tl;dr topographic features ("I can see the mountains from my village") and travel times give a general frame of things without breaking the immersion.
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In Uprooted, Naomi Novik deals quite elegantly with this issue.
First, she doesn't dump all the information at once, but sprinkles it where it's relevant.
We lived in Dvernik, which wasn't the biggest village in the valley or the smallest, or the one nearest the Wood: we were seven miles away. The road took us up over a big hill, though, and at the top on a clear day you could see along the river all the way to the pale grey strip of burned earth at the leading edge, and the solid dark wall of trees beyond. The Dragon's tower was a long way in the other direction, a piece of white chalk stuck in the base of the western mountains. (Naomi Novik, Uprooted, chapter 1)
So we learn the topographic details (valley, mountains on one side, forest on the other, you can see from one end to the other from atop a hill.
Later, we gain more bits and pieces:
Our valley was at the very edge of Polnya (ibid)
and
The Dragon had been called to court that year (ibid)
and
He never came out of his tower to stand a drink for the men at harvest-time the way the Baron of the Yellow Marshes would. (ibid)
and
singers would come through over the mountain pass from Rosya (ibid)
So gradually we learn the name of the country (Polnya), and that there's another country (Rosya), that the court of Polnya is some distance from the valley, that there's a place called "Yellow Marshes" and it's close enough for villagers to be familiar with how their lord acts. All of this information is interwoven with the narration. Because the cartography information is interwoven with the narration, it creates a general picture that fits into the story, instead of requiring the reader to remember details that are not connected to anything.
Distances in kilometres are less important than "how long it would take to travel from point A to point B". If there's a mountain range between point A and point B, they're for all intents and purposes farther apart than if there were fields there instead. It used to be quite common to measure distances in days of travel (on horse, on foot), and that's information you can expect a common illiterate person to know; not from one side of the country to another, but from one village to another, to the nearest city, etc. A person would know quite well the area within which he routinely travels (whether it's a farmer who travels as far as the nearest market, or a peddler who does somewhat longer journeys, or a soldier who's being sent every which way). Beyond that, they'd have an idea of what's around, gleaned from what they head at the market or in a tavern. And further away it's names of important locations and "here be dragons". If you think about it, there was no reason for an average person to care about distance in km, but every reason to care about distance in travel-days.
tl;dr topographic features ("I can see the mountains from my village") and travel times give a general frame of things without breaking the immersion.
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In Uprooted, Naomi Novik deals quite elegantly with this issue.
First, she doesn't dump all the information at once, but sprinkles it where it's relevant.
We lived in Dvernik, which wasn't the biggest village in the valley or the smallest, or the one nearest the Wood: we were seven miles away. The road took us up over a big hill, though, and at the top on a clear day you could see along the river all the way to the pale grey strip of burned earth at the leading edge, and the solid dark wall of trees beyond. The Dragon's tower was a long way in the other direction, a piece of white chalk stuck in the base of the western mountains. (Naomi Novik, Uprooted, chapter 1)
So we learn the topographic details (valley, mountains on one side, forest on the other, you can see from one end to the other from atop a hill.
Later, we gain more bits and pieces:
Our valley was at the very edge of Polnya (ibid)
and
The Dragon had been called to court that year (ibid)
and
He never came out of his tower to stand a drink for the men at harvest-time the way the Baron of the Yellow Marshes would. (ibid)
and
singers would come through over the mountain pass from Rosya (ibid)
So gradually we learn the name of the country (Polnya), and that there's another country (Rosya), that the court of Polnya is some distance from the valley, that there's a place called "Yellow Marshes" and it's close enough for villagers to be familiar with how their lord acts. All of this information is interwoven with the narration. Because the cartography information is interwoven with the narration, it creates a general picture that fits into the story, instead of requiring the reader to remember details that are not connected to anything.
Distances in kilometres are less important than "how long it would take to travel from point A to point B". If there's a mountain range between point A and point B, they're for all intents and purposes farther apart than if there were fields there instead. It used to be quite common to measure distances in days of travel (on horse, on foot), and that's information you can expect a common illiterate person to know; not from one side of the country to another, but from one village to another, to the nearest city, etc. A person would know quite well the area within which he routinely travels (whether it's a farmer who travels as far as the nearest market, or a peddler who does somewhat longer journeys, or a soldier who's being sent every which way). Beyond that, they'd have an idea of what's around, gleaned from what they head at the market or in a tavern. And further away it's names of important locations and "here be dragons". If you think about it, there was no reason for an average person to care about distance in km, but every reason to care about distance in travel-days.
tl;dr topographic features ("I can see the mountains from my village") and travel times give a general frame of things without breaking the immersion.
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In Uprooted, Naomi Novik deals quite elegantly with this issue.
First, she doesn't dump all the information at once, but sprinkles it where it's relevant.
We lived in Dvernik, which wasn't the biggest village in the valley or the smallest, or the one nearest the Wood: we were seven miles away. The road took us up over a big hill, though, and at the top on a clear day you could see along the river all the way to the pale grey strip of burned earth at the leading edge, and the solid dark wall of trees beyond. The Dragon's tower was a long way in the other direction, a piece of white chalk stuck in the base of the western mountains. (Naomi Novik, Uprooted, chapter 1)
So we learn the topographic details (valley, mountains on one side, forest on the other, you can see from one end to the other from atop a hill.
Later, we gain more bits and pieces:
Our valley was at the very edge of Polnya (ibid)
and
The Dragon had been called to court that year (ibid)
and
He never came out of his tower to stand a drink for the men at harvest-time the way the Baron of the Yellow Marshes would. (ibid)
and
singers would come through over the mountain pass from Rosya (ibid)
So gradually we learn the name of the country (Polnya), and that there's another country (Rosya), that the court of Polnya is some distance from the valley, that there's a place called "Yellow Marshes" and it's close enough for villagers to be familiar with how their lord acts. All of this information is interwoven with the narration. Because the cartography information is interwoven with the narration, it creates a general picture that fits into the story, instead of requiring the reader to remember details that are not connected to anything.
Distances in kilometres are less important than "how long it would take to travel from point A to point B". If there's a mountain range between point A and point B, they're for all intents and purposes farther apart than if there were fields there instead. It used to be quite common to measure distances in days of travel (on horse, on foot), and that's information you can expect a common illiterate person to know; not from one side of the country to another, but from one village to another, to the nearest city, etc. A person would know quite well the area within which he routinely travels (whether it's a farmer who travels as far as the nearest market, or a peddler who does somewhat longer journeys, or a soldier who's being sent every which way). Beyond that, they'd have an idea of what's around, gleaned from what they head at the market or in a tavern. And further away it's names of important locations and "here be dragons". If you think about it, there was no reason for an average person to care about distance in km, but every reason to care about distance in travel-days.
tl;dr topographic features ("I can see the mountains from my village") and travel times give a general frame of things without breaking the immersion.
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Create a Fantasy Map.
It doesn't need to be terribly detailed, and it is a beloved convention of fantasy genre.
Writing Excuses has a podcast on the topic: https://writingexcuses.com/2016/11/03/11-bonus-03-some-books-have-maps-in-the-front-with-maurice-broaddus-mur-lafferty-and-james-sutter/
The website Fantastic Maps has tutorials in many styles:
http://www.fantasticmaps.com
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Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
– kikirex
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@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
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Create a Fantasy Map.
It doesn't need to be terribly detailed, and it is a beloved convention of fantasy genre.
Writing Excuses has a podcast on the topic: https://writingexcuses.com/2016/11/03/11-bonus-03-some-books-have-maps-in-the-front-with-maurice-broaddus-mur-lafferty-and-james-sutter/
The website Fantastic Maps has tutorials in many styles:
http://www.fantasticmaps.com
answered 2 hours ago
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Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
– kikirex
1 hour ago
@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
– Sara Costa
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up vote
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Create a Fantasy Map.
It doesn't need to be terribly detailed, and it is a beloved convention of fantasy genre.
Writing Excuses has a podcast on the topic: https://writingexcuses.com/2016/11/03/11-bonus-03-some-books-have-maps-in-the-front-with-maurice-broaddus-mur-lafferty-and-james-sutter/
The website Fantastic Maps has tutorials in many styles:
http://www.fantasticmaps.com
answered 2 hours ago
wetcircuit
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Create a Fantasy Map.
It doesn't need to be terribly detailed, and it is a beloved convention of fantasy genre.
Writing Excuses has a podcast on the topic: https://writingexcuses.com/2016/11/03/11-bonus-03-some-books-have-maps-in-the-front-with-maurice-broaddus-mur-lafferty-and-james-sutter/
The website Fantastic Maps has tutorials in many styles:
http://www.fantasticmaps.com
answered 2 hours ago
wetcircuit
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answered 2 hours ago
wetcircuit
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answered 2 hours ago
wetcircuit
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Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
– kikirex
1 hour ago
@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
– Sara Costa
13 mins ago
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Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
– kikirex
1 hour ago
@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
– Sara Costa
13 mins ago
1
1
Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
– kikirex
1 hour ago
Altough I love seeing maps in fantasy books, I believe the question is more about descriptions within the text. However, I can't resist to put The Cartographer's Guild link here.
– kikirex
1 hour ago
@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
– Sara Costa
13 mins ago
@kikirex: While I do agree with you, I also think this might be the best answer for the question. If the characters aren't supposed to have enough topographic information to satisfy the readers who crave it... then a map is the way to go, IMHO, allowing the characters to show off their ignorance in the text.
– Sara Costa
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I can think of a few stock phrases and techniques that might be useful to you:
use time instead of distance, "[hours, days, weeks or months] of travel" people travel
at different rates so while it gives an idea of the relationship between two places it doesn't give a precise distance.when you do give numbered distances be vague, "hundreds of miles", "four thousand odd miles", again it gives the reader an idea of what it takes to go from A to B but without giving an exact position.
with directions use the cardinal points, north, south, east, and west, precisely but the then be vague about the secondary notes "a hundred miles north, and somewhat east of...", this puts you roughly on the map without being an exact position or travel distance.
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I can think of a few stock phrases and techniques that might be useful to you:
use time instead of distance, "[hours, days, weeks or months] of travel" people travel
at different rates so while it gives an idea of the relationship between two places it doesn't give a precise distance.when you do give numbered distances be vague, "hundreds of miles", "four thousand odd miles", again it gives the reader an idea of what it takes to go from A to B but without giving an exact position.
with directions use the cardinal points, north, south, east, and west, precisely but the then be vague about the secondary notes "a hundred miles north, and somewhat east of...", this puts you roughly on the map without being an exact position or travel distance.
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I can think of a few stock phrases and techniques that might be useful to you:
use time instead of distance, "[hours, days, weeks or months] of travel" people travel
at different rates so while it gives an idea of the relationship between two places it doesn't give a precise distance.when you do give numbered distances be vague, "hundreds of miles", "four thousand odd miles", again it gives the reader an idea of what it takes to go from A to B but without giving an exact position.
with directions use the cardinal points, north, south, east, and west, precisely but the then be vague about the secondary notes "a hundred miles north, and somewhat east of...", this puts you roughly on the map without being an exact position or travel distance.
answered 2 hours ago
Ash
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I can think of a few stock phrases and techniques that might be useful to you:
use time instead of distance, "[hours, days, weeks or months] of travel" people travel
at different rates so while it gives an idea of the relationship between two places it doesn't give a precise distance.when you do give numbered distances be vague, "hundreds of miles", "four thousand odd miles", again it gives the reader an idea of what it takes to go from A to B but without giving an exact position.
with directions use the cardinal points, north, south, east, and west, precisely but the then be vague about the secondary notes "a hundred miles north, and somewhat east of...", this puts you roughly on the map without being an exact position or travel distance.
answered 2 hours ago
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